Wednesday 1 March 2017

Quick Write - By William

Check out this descriptive piece of writing written today by William. Doesn't he bring the words to life through his choice of words?

Today's Igniter


Sometime, in the lively jungle, somewhere where the rivers are rushing for joy, where the skies are so blue, where your magical mind opens up more than any wall around you, where the enchanted trees peek over the rooftops... (to be continued)

By William

Well done, William. What a beautiful piece of writing you produced today. - Miss Drake

7 comments:

  1. Way to go William! From very proud parents.

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  2. Wow William, I would love to be in that jungle watching the rivers rush past. It sounds so beautiful. Thank you for drawing such a delicious picture with your words. Brylee

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  3. Look forward to hearing more of this story. It sounds like a very exciting place to visit. Andrew B

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  4. Well done William. You can write so much better than your Dad!

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  5. Great piece of writing William. I read it before my job interview and it inspired my mind to see no walls limiting my prospects for the role in which I was being interviewed for! Very impactful writing great indeed.

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  6. Awesome words, William. We could believe we were in that jungle and saw and heard it all happening around us. Poetical.
    Grandad Ted and Shan

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  7. Awesome writing, William. We could believe we were in that jungle, and see and hear everything going on around us. Poetical.
    Grandad Ted & Shan

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