Shared Writing
Room 13 put their brain power together to come up with an interesting and descriptive piece of writing about Autumn.Our first attempt...
Second attempt. Have a look at how much more interesting their story is with lots of adjectives and detail added to it.
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| "I love the interesting vocabulary you have used," said Miss Drake |
The trees look beautiful and colorful. I thought the story was really descriptive and when Aileen read it to us we could see, hear and feel autumn. Good work room 13!
ReplyDeleteAileen even got to read some of the story at Junior Assembly today. She read it beautifully!
DeleteIsaac was so proud to share this collaborative effort. It is a beautiful story, great work!
ReplyDeleteI LOVED Isaac's line about the 'leaves sleeping.' So descriptive!
DeleteEddie and I check the blog every day and get so excited when there is a new post. Eddie says doing these autumn projects was "awesome, creative and fun!"
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful trees Room 13.
ReplyDeleteWow these collaborative trees look amazing Room 13. You have worked together so well to create such fabulous art works. I also thought your poem with the adjectives added to it was wonderful.
ReplyDeleteWow Room 13! What creative writers and artists you are! I loved your Autumn poem, especially the piece about 'stomping through the cracked leaves' and your trees look fabulous. Well done! I can't wait to see what you are learning about in Term 2.
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